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first draft finished, at 12,600 words. i spent the last fifteen minutes trying to rewrite the last sex scene to have a blowjob in it, because between this story and the sequel i've already started, the sex comes off kind of...weirdly unequal? it might just be my neuroses, idk. also i was tidying up some of the blocking and i realized that oral sex would make much more sense, in terms of plausible choreography, than what i actually had there. but i couldn't do it, i'm just too attached to the sex i've already written. the point is: draft is finished. FINALLY.